Tuesday, September 21, 2010
In class: First paragraph
Upon driving down to Throckmorton Street in downtown Fort Worth, you will find a restaurant called P.F. Chang’s China Bistro at the corner of the street. The big sign of this restaurant is really conspicuous, and I bet you will never miss it. P F Chang’s China Bistro is an authentic Chinese restaurant that has antique decoration, comfortable atmosphere, and delicious food. It opens from 11a.m. to 10p.m. from Sunday to Thursday, and 11a.m. to 11p.m. from Friday to Saturday.
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It seems that you have read the sample essay. I think it is a good opening with pointing out the location of the P.F Chang'. However, I dont think that you need to give out so much detailed information about P.F Chang in the first paragraph.
ReplyDeleteI think you had a great time writing down notes, especially because they served chinese food. The first paragraph was very precise and informative.
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