This is a make up in class writing, because that day i was taken to the hospital and didn't post it on my blog.
i think i need to observe more carefully and probably focus on the detail about everything I observed. It seems like the things what i have already observed were not enough for an essay. Like i need to think about what type of people are going into the PF Changs? Does the demographic change during the day? what type of drinks are they ordering? and so on.
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